This is a painful dnf. I tried to read this, I truly did, but I couldn’t get myself through this. It’s as if someone looked at all the tropes I disliked and put them into one book. I’m honestly sad because I was almost certain I would love this, but by the first page I already knew that was not the case. The writing wasn’t atrocious, it was fairly basic and didn’t capture my attention. The characters, oh the characters, were not my cup of tea whatsoever and felt like a mix of basic stereotypes thrown into one. I did not feel connected to the characters and I honestly can’t even remember at what page I dnf’ed this on (I also can’t even remember what the names of the characters were since I dnf’ed it months ago and am only now writing a review, yes I know, I’m quite intelligent 😂). I won’t be adding a rating on goodreads since I’m fairly certain I didn’t make it past the halfway mark.
Thank you to the publisher and netgalley for providing me with a review copy. All opinions are my own.
I was so excited to read this, but it turned out to be a huge let-down. All of the characters were super flat, if the mc was to be murdered at any moment, I would not feel a thing. The main character was a complete Mary Sue, and honestly, so was everyone else. All of the “plot twists” I saw a mile away, and nothing really surprised or intrigued me in this story.
The romance was just not done right. I don’t want to include any spoilers, but the supposed love interest caused a great deal of pain to the mc. And all she could say was “I CAN’T SEE YOU TODAY.” LIKE WHAT EVEN, if something like that happened to me I would’ve been furious and not want to see the person for an ETERNITY. I know that the mc was in a unique situation, but it still didn’t make it right, and she was so easy to forgive. And even more than that, all she could say about anyone in the novel is “OH HE’S SO HOT BUT TERRIBLE.” LIKE WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS GIRL. The main love interest (I honestly have no clue if this was a love triangle or not, this book was that confusing and a bunch of love interests were introduced last minute) constantly kissed the mc with no regard for her comfort and she just went along with it even though she “hates” him. I wouldn’t call this novel a romance, even though it did try and focus on the aspect a lot, because it was really just a bunch of kissing and memories of “love.”
I wish I could say that I liked or disliked a character, but I was so unattached to this book that I just did not care about anyone. This novel really did feel like I was reading about characters who had no emotions, robots at that, and I did not like it whatsoever. I was told that the mc was angry, I was not shown her frustration with the world itself. This story is in first person but I felt very detached to the main character and everyone else. Also, this was one of those novels where the bad guys were solely “bad” for the sake of being villains. They cackled and had dark backstories and were evil with no actual motive. I really don’t like it when characters are this bland and nothing was really memorable about this book. The main character acted very immature, and the whole “chosen one” trope has been done a MILLION TIMES. I’m sick of seeing it in novels, a simple Mary Sue becomes almighty in a matter of seconds and then says “OH, I ALWAYS KNEW I WAS SPECIAL, DEEP DOWN INSIDE.” I just can’t. Tropes can be done right, but this one was not.
The writing was bland and boring, and I found myself losing focus as I tried to read this novel. I started in the morning yesterday, and took hour-long breaks because I couldn’t continue. In the end, I forced myself to read through and was disappointed but not surprised. I want to give this one star but since it wasn’t very problematic and I don’t hate it, I’m going to be generous and give it two. I can say though that the book doesn’t have many grammatical or spelling errors and the cliffhanger at the end captured my attention, which is good, but doesn’t make up for my discontent with this novel.
Review copy provided by the publisher and booksirens in exchange for an honest review.